Saturday 1 September 2012
WRITING TASK FOR CLASS X. 2 SAKRA
Write a personal recount text and answer some questions below!
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1. Orientation:
- Who is involved?
- Where did it happen?
- When did it happen?
2. Sequence of events:
- What happened?
- What did it happen?
- What did you do?
3. Comments
- What's your comment about what had happened?
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Nama : Nurrizqi Oktavia
ReplyDeleteNo : 21
Class : X.2
RAMAYANA
When I still at Junior High School, I and my friends ; Meta, Friska, Hesti, Ummul, Fitri, and Kiky had Indonesian task for played a drama. The theme of this drama was RAMAYANA . I and my friends only had time fife days for wrote manuscript and practice.
All my group was a girls. So the man character was played by girl. I got character as prince Rama, Kiky as Princes Shinta, Meta as Hanoman, Friska as Laksmana, Fitri as Wibisana, Hesti as Rahwana because her body was fat, and Ummul as Sarpakenaka.
We did this drama in my class.The first we felt very nervous, but we sure that we can do it with very good. we played this drama like when we practice with little improvisation. When we did the fougth scene, we did it with slow motion. So my other friends were laughed.The other my friends looked enjoyed our perform. And it made us happy.
This is my best drama ever I had with my friends.
1. ORIENTATION
- Who is in volved ?: I and my friends (Meta, Friska, Hesti, Ummul, Fitri, and Kiky)
- Where did it happen? : In my class
- When did it happen?: when I still at Junior High School
2. SEQUENCE OF EVENTS
- What happened? : I and my friends had Indonesian task for played a drama
- What did it happen? : I and my friends only had time fife days for wrote manuscript and practice.
- What did you do? : All my group was a girls. So the man character was played by girl. I got character as prince Rama, Kiky as Princes Shinta, Meta as Hanoman, Friska as Laksmana, Fitri as Wibisana, Hesti as Rahwana because her body was fat, and Ummul as Sarpakenaka. We did this drama in my class.The first we felt very nervous, but we sure that we can do it with very good. we played this drama like when we practice with little improvisation. When we did the fougth scene, we did it with slow motion. So my other friends were laughed.The other my friends looked enjoyed our perform. And it made us happy.
3. COMMENTS
- What's your comment about what had happened?:
This is my best drama ever I had with my friends
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ReplyDeletename:mochaji sukmawan
ReplyDeleteclass:x.2
number:16
Wonderful camping
Last holiday,my friends and I went camping Together for three
days.we camped in mount Bunder.it is part of mount salak,west
java
My friends and I arrived at the camsite on Saturday evening. The
weather was not good At the time .it had been raining for hours
and It made me sick.i felt very cold. Nevertheless, I helped my friends
put up a tent soon after we got three .this was our first experience
in handling the tent and it turned out that the task was not easy
at all. It look us an hour to make the tent stand up properly.
Felling hungry and exhausted ,we then had dinner and took a rest.
We went to slep right after we finished our dinner.
The next morning,we felt fresh again.we did some exercise with
Some rock music played throught a radio.my friends,randy,got
Too excited that he slipped on his knee. We laughed so loud because
The incident was very funny. He fell down because of a banana
Skin that he had thrown away at dinner. I already told him to
Throw the litter in the garbage can, but he wouldn`t listen.
After heaving some exercise and breakfast,I took a bath. I was
So ready to do many activities that days. My friends and I shared
Our knowledge about how to survive in the woods. In the
Afternoon,we played some games. The most exciting one was
The game that they called the”flying fox”. It was a little bit scary
At first,but I quite enjoyed it.
On the last day of the camping trip,we visited the cigamea
Waterfall. Local people call it curug cigamea. It had the most
Wonderful view. My friends and I took some pictures and
Played in the water. It was really fun.
My camping trip was the best trip I’ve ever had.
1 orientation
-Who? I and my friends rendy
-Where?we camped in mound bunder
And visited the cigamea waterfall
-When? At last holiday
2.sequence of events
-event 1? it had been raining for hours and It made me sick.i felt very cold.
-Event 2? my friends,randy,got Too excited that he slipped on his knee
-Event3? In the Afternoon,we played some games. The most exciting
one wasThe game that they called the”flying fox”.
3.coments
My camping trip was the best trip I’ve ever had
Nama: Tutut Handayani
ReplyDeleteNo:30
A VISIT TO A SHEEP PROPERTY
Last holiday, I visited a sheep property I helped in the shearing sheds and in the yards.
On the first day wethers were sheared. I helped by sweeping and picking up wool pieces. Shears start early at 7.30 a.m.
I was tired by the end of the day in the shed, but our work was not finished. We all had to help to get the wethers and lambs back into the paddock. As well, we had to get a mob of ewes and lambs into the yards for shearing the next day. Then it for it ( that’s what my grandma calls dinner )
This was a very long day, but I enjoyed it a lot.
1. ORIENTATIONS
- Who is involved?:
I and my grandma
- Where did it happen?:
In the sheep property, sheds, yards, and paddock.
- When did it happen?:
Last holiday.
2. SEQUENCE OF EVENTS
- What happened?:
I visited a sheep property I helped in the shearing sheds and in the yards.
- What did it happen?:
- I was tired by the end of the day in the shed, but our work was not finished. We all had to help to get the wethers and lambs back into the paddock. As well, we had to get a mob of ewes and lambs into the yards for shearing the next day. Then it for it ( that’s what my grandma calls dinner )
- What did you do?:
On the first day wethers were sheared. I helped by sweeping and picking up wool pieces. Shears start early at 7.30 a.m.
3. COMMENTS:
This was a very long day, but I enjoyed it a lot.
Nama : Hidayati
ReplyDeleteKelas : X.2
No. : 07
assignment of personal experience
An unforgettable experience
Two years ago I went to the hospital to check. And the doctor said my breast tumor disease and disaran it for operation.
My mother agreed to be fast in operation, and on the 26th of March I performed the operation up and running smoothly.
And that makes me moved all of my friends and my homeroom see me, no I guess. at that time I was very happy.
Text Recount
Going to Andy’s house
Yesterday my brother and i went to Andy’s house, we went there by public transportation. We left at seven in the morning and arrived there at 07.35 a.m.
Arriving there we were greeted by Anna. Anna is Andy’s sister. She said that Andy was still slepping. We asked her to wake Andy up because we did not want to wait .
Shortly, Andy met us. He showed his poster collections. All of Andy’s poster were superstar poster.He collected them since two years ago
After we saw all of his poster, we watched television. We went home a 1 o’clock. It was tiring but we were happy.
1.Orientation
-Who?
Andy and Anna
-Where?
In the home
-When?
In morning at 07.35 a.m
2.Sequence of Events
• Event 1? -my brother and I went to Andy’s home
-we went there by public transportation
• Event 2? – Andy was still sleeping
• Event 3? – He showed his poster collections
- All of Andy’s poster were superstars poster
• Event 4? – we watched television
- It was tiring but we were happy
3.Coments
the story was very enjoyable.
fishing can flip
ReplyDeleteOne day, me and my friends would go out to sea. I think to go sea while fishing, so I talk about it with my friends. we agreed to fishing.
in the morning, we bring their own fishing equipment-own.We fishing on the pier. I started throwing my fishing hook. after waiting 30 minutes, I felt heavy fishing hook once, after it turned out that I could lift was a flip. I feel ashamed that my friends laugh at me.
my friends have gotten fish each, only I have not received anything. I finally was given the fish by one of my friends. we burn the fish on the beach and we ate together.
experience a memorable and funny. (I think)
1. Orientation:
- Who is involved?
* me and my friends
- Where did it happen?
*in the sea
- When did it happen?
*one day
2. Sequence of events:
- event 1
*will leave the sea and fishing
- event 2
*Our fishing pier. I started throwing my fishing hook. after waiting 30 minutes, I felt heavy fishing hook once, after it turned out that I could lift was a flip.
- event 3
*we burn the fish on the beach and we ate together.
3. Comments
-experience a memorable and funny.
name:restu ajitio
no:24
class:X 2
MY HOLIDAY TOGETHER MY FRIENDS
ReplyDeleteLast, week I went to guci together my friends there vised my grandmather’s house then I my friends visited garden strawberry then I and my friends pick my garden with colourfull and very-very beatifull
In the morning ,my friend and I go to mount slamet then I and my friends bath in waterfall but my friends slip then I help but it was fun experience after then we to go home.
ORIENTATION
WHO : I and my friends
WHERE: Mount slamet guci
WHEN: Last week
SEQUENCE OF EVENT
EVENT 1 : Last week I went to gether my friends there vised my granmather’s
EVENT 2: house then I my friends visited garden strawberry
EVENT 3: In the morning , my friend and I I go to mount slamet
EVENT 4: friends slip then I help but is was fun experience
COMENT : I was hepyy
NAMA: anis nurahmawati
KELAS; X2
NO:1
1. Orientation
ReplyDelete-Who
I and My Family
-Where
Place at the seaside
-When
Last Holiday
2. Sequence Of Event
-Event 1
My Family likes the sea very much. When we had a holiday last years, we went to a place at the seaside and borrowed a boat from one of our friends. Then we sailed and fished on the sea all day. We also had races against other boats.
-Event 2
When the sea was rough, we sailed on a small lake near the sea instead. We were very careful on this lake, because there were a lot of sharp rocks there, and the water was shallow. We did not want to damage our friend’s boat.
-Event 3
There were not many fish in the lake, but in the sea we caught a lot with a hook, line and small pieces of bread. The fish were not very big, but they tasted very good. When the weather was fine, we sailed to the land at lunch time, collected pieces of dry wood and fried or grilled our fish over them on the beach.
-Event 4
There is an Island about a mile from our friend’s house, and we sailed to it. The water was very clean there, and there was a beautiful beach with white sand and no rocks. We bathed there.
3. Comments
It was a lot of fun.
Nama : Lianah nur p.
ReplyDeleteNo abs : 14
Kelas : X 2
Mapel : b.Inggris
last holiday trip
purin Iand my sister
last week, I and y sister go to puriin theree are many animal,also are swiming pool and beach.there I and my sister playing swiming after that I and my sister eating meet boll
then I and my sister to go home in joutney I saw chiliders was playingg footbal.
nama: isna oktaniantika rahayu
ReplyDeletekelas: X2
noabs: 10
last holiday trip
widuri I and family
last mount i and my family go to widuri there are garden also are swiming pool and bouch. there I sn my family eat chiken noodle
nama: isna oktaniantika rahayu
ReplyDeletekelas: X2
noabs: 10
last holiday trip
widuri I and family
last mount i and my family go to widuri there are garden also are swiming pool and bouch. there I sn my family eat chiken noodle
Orientation :
ReplyDelete-who
Aldi and Doni
-where
Zimbabwe to South Africa
-when
May 1974
-Event 1
As they carefully drove through out the nigh, they saw a flashing blue-white light that was going on and off in a slow, steady rhythm
-Event 2
Inside the car, it suddenly because very cold
-Event 3
Then their car began to act very strangely
-Event 4
The driver and the passengers lost consciousness
Comments:
Although the couple's description of what happened contained plenty
Name :Intan Ayu Lestari
Class : X-2
Absent Number : 09
1. EVENTS
ReplyDeleteMy friends of mine asked me to accompany him to buy a new shirt at a depertement store. So as soon as we arrived there with motocycle. But I could not find him there. My mobile phone was broken. So I couldn’t call him. I went to the parking area. I saw his motocycle was there. But i could not find him so l then , finally l gave up and decided to go home . when l arrived home,my mother told my friend called.she toad that he was in the departement store looking for me.and my mother asked my to come departement store l walked l arrived ther .his motorclycle was not in the parking area .l was very tired and angry, but finally l had to walk home again my friend browat smille with me in front of the door,just could not help loughing .
2. COMMENTS
This is fun experiens.
name : Annida rizqi a
no :2
Name : Nasda Asyifa
ReplyDeleteNo : 19
Class: X.2
A Beautiful Trip
Six days ago, i went to Lake Toba to visit my cousin, Sinta. We going to spend seven days at Lake Toba. I was so happy that i did not know what to say.
On the first day arrived. We left Singapore International Airlines flight to Medan. The magnificent view from the plane was so breathtaking that i do not know how to describe it. We touched down at the grand Medan air port an hour late. Sinta was waiting to take us to the beautiful town at parapat, one hundred and seventy six kilometers away.
By the time we the time we reached parapat it was already late. Lake Toba’s moonlight was absolutely masmerizing. As lake toba is nine hundred and ten meters above sea. Level, I enjoyed the fresh mountain air. We cheked in at a huge bungalow type hotel.
The next morning, we rose early to watch the beautiful sunrise. Camera’s clicked frequently to capture the breathtaking scenery before us. We enjoyed exelent facilitioes for swimming, boating, fishing, and water skiing. In fact, there were so many things to do that I could not decide wich to try first.
After breakfast, my unclebrought us around the town. We were imprissed by the exquisite handicraft and politenes of the local people. There were so many imprissive souvenirs that we did not know what to buy our beloved ones back home.
In the evening, we went to watch a bautiful cultural show. We enjoyed the rhythm of the songs and joined the pretty batak singer in chorus.
1. ORIENTATION
- Who is involved?:
Andi and sinta
- Where did it happen?:
Lake Toba, Medan
- When did it happen?:
Six days ago
2. SEQUNCE OF EVENS
- What happened?;
We were impressed by the exquisite handicrafts and politenness of the local people.
- What did it happen?:
I was so happy that i did not know what to say
3. COMMENTS
We enjoyed the rhythm of the songs and joined the pretty Batak singers in chorus.
Name;Wildan hakim
ReplyDeleteKelas;X2
No;31
Say,
Mousedeer And Crocodile
Once upon a time a mousedeer walked in the jungle.
He felt tired and thirsty.
Suddenly,a crocodile appread from the riverand grabbed his legs,The mousedeer though a way to escape from the crocodile.Finally the mousedeer got a brilliant idea.He ask the crocodile to makea row from one side of te river to the other.the crocodile did as the mousedeer told.he started to count from one to ten while jumping from one crocodile to the other.at the ten count the mousedeer made a long long jump.
He reached to the other said good bye stupid crocodiles.
1)Orientation
-Who:Mousedeer and Crocodile
-Where :in a jungle
-When:Once upon a time
2)Sequence of Event
-Event 1:
Suddenly a crocodile appread from the river and grabbed his legs,The mousedeer though a way to escape from the crocodile.
-Event 2:
He started to count from one to ten while jumping from one crocodile to the other.
-Event 3:
He ask the crocodile to make a row from one side of thr tiver to the other.
-Event 4:
At the ten count the mousedeer made a long long jump.
3)Comments:
He reached the other said good by stupid crocodile.
at pantai alam indah beach
ReplyDeleteat last holiday, i and my three cousins bahri, fira, and syifa went to pantai alam indah. it is name of beach of our town, tegal. we left early in the morning because we planned to see the sunrise. and that's really right. we watched a fantastic nature phenomena of sunrise scenery. the sky were red and yellowish and the sea looked like a huge piece of gold. we could also see the sun shape that looked quite round and white.
at about seven o'clock a.m we began to play at the beach side. bahri swam happily. fira and syifa tried to built a sand castille. i my self, just stood at the beach side and enjoyed the seashore softly hitting my feet. sometimes, i took my cousins pictures by my little camera.
but, our pleasure activities didn't last long. when the sunshine became hotter, we stopped our playing and immediately left the beach. before we went home, we had breakfast at a foodstall nearby. although it was it short time, we ware very happy having a vocation at the beach.
1. Orientation:
- Who is involved?
i and my three cousins bahri, fira, and syifa
- Where did it happen?
at pantai alam indah beach
- When did it happen?
at last holiday
2. Sequence of events:
- event 1
me and my cousin went to sea and was going to see the sunrise
- event 2
we began to play at the beach side. bahri swam happily. fira and syifa tried to built a sand castille. i my self, just stood at the beach side and enjoyed the seashore softly hitting my feet.
event 3
we stopped our playing and immediately left the beach. before we went home, we had breakfast at a foodstall nearby.
3. Comments
-Discover the simple but enjoyable
name : roikhatul janah
no : 26
Name: Dimas agung riawan
ReplyDeleteClass: x.2
Number: 6
Last holiday was linda’s unforgettable experience . she could spent her holiday by visiting many interesting places.
First ,she visited her grandmother in malang.she enjoyed salekta, the place with cool and comfortabe air. The scenery was beautiful. She spent a day there. She didn`t forget to buy special fruit from that city,apples. They are sweet and fresh.
Her next destination was yogyakarta where her aunt, mrs. Lutfia lived. Although the weather was hot, she could enjoy parangtritis beach, prambanan temple and malioboro stree.
The last trip was dieng plateu. The cold weather made her vacation nice and enjoyable. Dieng was her uncle’e resident. She enjoyed “ Telaga Warna” and wonderful landscape
1 Orientation
-who? linda
-where? visiting many interesting places,visited her grandmother in malang, next destination was yogyakarta where her aunt, mrs. Lutfia lived
-when? Last holiday
2 sequence of events
-event 1 ? First ,she visited her grandmother in malang.she enjoyed salekta, the place with cool and comfortabe air. The scenery was beautiful. She spent a day there. She didn`t forget to buy special fruit from that city,apples. They are sweet and fresh
-event 2 ? Her next destination was yogyakarta where her aunt, mrs. Lutfia lived. Although the weather was hot, she could enjoy parangtritis beach, prambanan temple and malioboro stree
3 coment
Moment
a most enjoyable
Name:Reni Murhaeni
ReplyDeleteClass:x2
Number:23
Lat week I went to beach.I stayed at my friend's house in pur'in.The house has a small garden with colourful flowers and a small pool.
In the morning,I and my friend's,rosa saw beach.the scenery was very beautiful.its was fun.
Then, we went took pictures of the beautiful scenery there.After that,we took a rest and hadlunch under a big tree.before we got home,we went to zoo at pur'in.we went home in the afternoon.we were very tired.However,I thinkit was really fun to have holiday like this.
1.Orientation
-who:I and rosa
-where:Beach
-when:Last week
2.Squence of event
-Event 1:In the morning,I and my friend's saw beach
-Event 2:Then,we went took pitcures of the beautiful scenery there.
3.Comment
-It was really fun tohave holiday like this.
Name:zulfa dika safera
ReplyDeleteclz:x.2
no.abs:32
HOLIDAY IN CLEVELAND
Last summer I got a fantastic holiday,i visited some great pleaces.I went to an airport and was going to see some cleveland. I was spending there two days. I liked to see some cleveland cavaliers basketball matches. then I went to hollywood. hollywood is a famous distric in los angels. calivornia,united states. it had become world.famous as the center of the film industry. four major film companies. paramount,warner bros,RKO and colombia. had studios in hollywood. I did not want to leave but I had to.
after that.I went to new york city, I visited the statue of liberty. I went from the bottom of manhattan to the top of the crown,that was very amazing.
the places made me feel at home but I have to go home. next time I would return to them.
cleveland fabuous
1.orietation
-who:randy's friend
-where:cleveland cavaliers,hollywood,los angels,new york, thestatue liberty
-when:cleveland cavaliers
2.squence of events
-event 1:hollywood is a famouse distric in los angels,calivornia united states
-event 2:after that i went to new york city
-event 3:last summer i got a fantastic holiday
-event 4:i was spending there teo days
3.comments
-cleveland fabuous.
Nama : Khaerunnisa
ReplyDeleteKelas : X2
No Absen :11
My Holiday
Last week, I went to mount Bromo. I stayed at my friend’s house in Probolinggo, East Java. The house has a big garden with colourful flowers and small pool.
In the morning, my friend and I saw mount Batok. The scenery was very beautiful. We rode on horseback. It was scary, but it was fun. Then we went to get a closer look at the mountain. We took pictures of the beautiful scenery there. After that, we took a rest and had lunch under a big tree. Before we got home, we went to the zoo at Wonokromo. We went home in the afternoon.
We were very tired. However, I think it was really fun to have a holiday like this. I hope my next holiday will be more interesting.
Orientation :
- Who : I and my friend’s
- When : Last week
- Where : In Mount Bromo
Sequence Of Events :
- Event 1 : In the morning, my friend and I saw mount Batok
- Event 2 : Then we went to get a closer look at the mountain
- Event 3 : After that, we took a rest and had lunch under a big tree
- Event 4 : Before we got home, we went to the zoo at Wonokromo
Comments : I think it was really fun to have a holiday like this. I hope my next holiday will be more interesting
Nama : Khu Zaemah Apriliani
ReplyDeleteKelas : X2
No absent :12
Our trip to the Blue Mountain
On Friday I and my friend’s to the Blue Mountains. We stayed at Andri’s house. It has a big garden with lots of colourful flowers and a tennis court.
On Saturday we saw the Three Sisters and went on the scenic railway. It was scary. Then, Mummy and I went shopping with Andri. We went to some antique shops and I tried on some old hats. On Sunday we went on the Scenic Skyway and it rocked. We saw cockatoos having a shower.
In the afternoon we went home.
Orientation :
- Who : I and my friend’s
- When : on Friday
- Where : in the blue mountain
Sequence Of Events :
- Event 1 : On Saturday, we saw the Three Sisters and went on the scenic railway
- Event 2 : Then, Mummy and I went shopping with Andri
- Event 3 : On Sunday we went on the Scenic Skyway and it rocked
Comments : I think the trip to the Blue Mountain is very interesting
NAMA; TRI INDAH PERMESTI
ReplyDeleteKELAS:X2
NO ABSEN:29
MY EXPERIENCE
Last month ,my brother of mine asked me to accompany him to holiday in house my uncle in Ngawi Jatim.We left home at 8 p.m we were there bay bus .From Tegal city we took 14 hours.
After that we hungry,we having dinner in RM PADANG in village Ponorogo Jatim.After that as soon we arrived there in home my uncle . We went on a small boat to see seeawed farming the waves there nice days in home my uncle. We were so happy we went beck to my home in Tegal city bay Train .I was so tried I was very hungry but we enjoyed.
Orentation;
Who; I and My brother
When:Last month
Where:In my home uncle in Ngawi jatim.
SEQUENCE OF EVENTS
Event 1;Last month my brother of mine asked me to accompany him to holiday in house my uncle.
Event 2;We were there bay bus.From Tegal city we took 14 hours.
Event 3;We dinner RM PADANG in village Ponorogo Jatim.
Event 4: we went on a small boat to see seeawed farming.
Event 5: We went beck my home in Tegal city.
COMMENTS;
Well finally I was so tried I was very hungry but we enjoyed.