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1. Orientation:
- Who is involved?
- Where did it happen?
- When did it happen?
2. Sequence of events:
- What happened?
- What did it happen?
- What did you do?
3. Comments
- What's your comment about what had happened?
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Nama : Siti khodijah
ReplyDeleteKelas : X.4
No. : 27
Unforgettable experience
On Saturday, exactly at the campground Cacaban, the council held a game-raisers. At that time I, Rendy, Kak kak krisna tri and try to make a bridge from the mine. after Rendy in order to pass the test mine. At the time until the middle of the bridge, rope bridge broke. then my tri kak, kak krisna and people who look simultaneously laugh out loud. although actually felt sorry, but we could not help laughing.
Unforgettable experience
I never imagined that one day I would go to schoolwith a bald het me. It had been partly my laziness and partly my sister`s f ever, it ault thad. How happened at my head was bald. Here is the story.
ReplyDeleteOne day, I notice that my hair had grown too long it has touching my collar. I thought my school`s discipline master, Mr ferdy, would not like it, I would go to barber, but my sister stopped me saying, “why waste so much money when I can do it for you free of charge?”
Actually I doubted that she could do it. However, finally I agreed it. I thought that it would save me the walk and money.
She started snipping my hair with a pair of scissors. Halfway thought, I panicked I saw in the mirror that things were not going very right. But my sister insisted she had not finised yet and told me to be patient. At the end of snipping, when I saw my self in the mirror, I was surprised. My hair reduced to nothing more than a haphazard havoc!
Using a hat to hide my hair, I went to a barber soon. He told me that there was no other way but for him to shave my head bald. I could say nothing but yes
1. Orientation
-who: I, my sister, school`s discipline master
-where: home and in the barber
-when: when I whould go to barber
2. Sequence of event
-when I would go to barber but my sister stopped me and offer her services
-but I doubted that she could do it
-and it turns out she can`t
- so I went to barber soon
3.Comment
-don`t offer your helped if you can`t
Last year i joined thee chichago marathon, my firs marathon. I had to run 26.2 miles to compled it. It was hard but I learned valuable things from joining it.
ReplyDeleteAt first, i just wanted to get the experience of joining of marathon. I thought it would be one live time experience. After f finishing it, i changed my mind. I want to joint to another one. I was interested in completing at least one more marathon and inprove mt time. I also experienced a good feeling between partticipants and the spactators, that made my happy. It was a very wonder ful thing for me. So i decided that i had to join another marathon the following year because i was not satisfied with this first one.
1. Orientation
-who: I
-where: chichago
-when: last year
2.Sequence of events
Event 1
This a first marathon
Event 2
He had to run 26.2 miles to complete
Event3
He also experienced a good feeling between participants and spectators, that made be he happy.
COMMENTS
WANTED THE EXPERIENCED SO MUCH
Name : M. Fariz Hamdani
ReplyDeleteClass : X4
Number : 19
a Trip to Mount Bromo
Last week I went to east Java for holiday. On the first day I went to Mount Bromo. I stayedat my uncle’s house at Cemara Lawang, Probolinggo. It has a big garden with lots of colorful flowers and a fish pond. The next day, my aunt, my uncle and I saw Gunung Batok and went on scenic ride onhorse back. It was scary. Then we went to get a closer look at the mountain. We took apicture of beautiful sceneries there.On the last day we went to the zoo at Wonokromo. We saw cockatoos having shower. Inthe afternoon we went home. It was fun.
1. Orientation:
- Who : me, my aunt, and my uncle
- Where : mount bromo
- When : last week
2. Sequence of events
- I went to mount bromo
- My aunt, my uncle, and I saw Gunung Batok and went on scenic ride on horse back. It was scary. then we went to get a closer look at the mountain. We took a picture of beautiful sceneries there
- We went to the zoo at Wonokromo. We saw cockatoos having shower
3. Comments
- A very pleasant experience
Name : Fany Nurhidayanti
ReplyDeleteClass : X_4
Number : 10
I spent my vacation on Pasir Putih Situbondo. It's a beautiful beach laying between Situbondo and Besuki. It has a long beach and a fantastic scenery. It was 31 December 2011. The day was dark. It seemed to rain. It was 1 p.m. when my family and I left Jember. We rode a car to Pasir Putih. On the way, it was raining heavily. The street was wet. The car ran slowly because the driver couldn't see more than 10 meters. It took around 3 hours to arrive at Pasir Putih. The beach looked so nice. Then, we sat down on the beach. Children played in the water.
1.Orientation
-who : me,my family, driver
-where : Pasir Putih Situbondo,Jember
-when : 31 december 2011
2. sequence of event
-I visit to Pasir Putih Beach
-played in the water
3. coment
-Pasir Putih Beach it's beatiful
Name:Endang.Wahyuningsih
ReplyDeleteClass:x4
Number:08
HAPPY HOLIDAY
Last holiday I and my brother went to jakarta.We stayed at my uncle's house.we left from home at 14.00 and arrived around the clock 22.00.After we arrived there,we left very tired and immediately.
On he first day in jakarta,Lina uncle daughter took me and my brother visited National Monument.we saw historic pitcures in the monument.
The next day,We went to Gelanggang Samudra,Ancol.We saw performig dolphins and seals.Performing very good and snappish.
On the following day,Lina brought we to Tanah Abang.I bought some clothes and bag for my friend's.My brother bought sunglasses and some clothes.
in the afternoon,we to take leave to unce's and lina to go house.I very sad have to house.But,I felt very happy can on vacation in the beauty this city.I very enjoyed this city.
1.Orientation
-Who :My,My Brother,my uncle's and Lina
-Where: In jakarta
-wHen :Last Holiday
2.Squence of event
-Event 1
On the first day in jakarta,Lina uncle's daughter took me and my brother visited National Monument.
-Event 2
The next day,We went to Gelanggang Samudra,Ancol.
-Event 3
Ont the Last day,Lina brought we to tanah abang.
3.Comment
-I felt very happy can on vacation in the beauty this city.I very enjoyed this holiday
Name : Maya Wulan Sari
ReplyDeleteClass : X 4
No. Absent : 16
A STUDY TOUR TO BALI
When I was 2nd grade of junior high school, my friends and I went to Bali. We were there for three days. I had many impressive experiences during the vacation.
First day, we visited Sanur Beach in the morning. We saw the beautiful sunrise together. It was a great sight. Then, we checked in to the hotel. After prepared ourselves, we went to Tanah Lot. We met so many other tourists there. They were not only domestic but also foreign tourists.
Second day, we enjoyed the day on Tanjung Benoa beach. We played so many water sports such as banana boat, jetsky, speedboat etc. We also went to Penyu island to see many unique animals. They were turtles, snakes, and sea birds. We were very happy. In the afternoon, we went to Kuta Beach to see the amazing sunset and enjoyed the beautiful wave.
The last day, we spent our time in Sangeh. We could enjoy the green and shady forest. There were so many monkies. They were so tame but sometimes they could be naughty. We could make a close interaction with them. After that, we went to Sukowati market for shopping. That was my lovely time. I bought some Bali T-Shirt and souvenirs.
In the evening, we had to check out from the hotel. We went back home bringing so many amazing memories of Bali.
For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Bali again.
1. Orientatioan :
my friends and I
Bali
2nd grade of junior high school
2. Sequence of event :
we visited Sanur Beach in the morning.
we enjoyed the day on Tanjung Benoa beach.
we spent our time in Sangeh.
3. Comments
For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Bali again.
Name : Azidni Faza
ReplyDeleteclass : X 4
No : 03
MY HOLIDAY
Last week I went to Mount Bromo. I stayed at my friend’s house in Probolinggo, East Java. The House has a big garden with colourful flowers and a small pool.
In the morning, my friend and I saw Mount Batok. The Scenery was very beautiful. We rode on horseback. It was scary, but it was fun. Then, we went to get a closer look at the mountain. We took pictures of the beautiful scenery there. After that, we took a rest and had lunch under a big tree. Before we got home, we went to the zoo at Wonokromo. We went home in the afternoon.
We were very tired. However, I think it was really fun to have a holiday like this. I hope my next holiday will be more interesting.
Orientation :
- Who went to Mount Bromo ? The writer
- When the writer holiday ? Last week
- Where location the Mount Bromo ? Probolinggo, East Java
Sequens of Event :
Event 1
Last week the writer went to Mount Bromo. The writer stayed at my friend’s in Probolinggo, East Java.
Event 2
In the morning, they saw Mount Batok. Then, they went to get a closer look at the mountain. They took pictures of the beautiful scenery there. After that, they took a rest and had lunchunder a big tree. Before got home, they went to the zoo at Wonokromo.
Event 3
They were very tired, However, the writer think it was really fun to have a holiday like this and next holiday will be more interesting.
Comments :
- Holliday it’s very happy. Because can fresh the mind, can a new experience, meet a far friend, and can lost statified
Name : Laela Nahdliyah
ReplyDeleteClass : X.4
No. : 14
My Holiday In Jogja
Last week, my friends and I went to Jogja. We visited many places.
First, we visited Parangtritis beach. The sun shone brightly and the scenery was very beautiful there. We felt the wind blew across to us. We also saw a lot of people in that beach. There were many birds flew in the sky. Also, there were many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs. Second, we visited Gembira Loka Zoo. We saw many kinds of animals there such as monkeys, tigers, crocodiles, snakes, etc. We looked around in that Zoo, and also took pictures of those animals. Then, we felt hungry, so we went to a restaurant. As soon as we finished our lunc, we decided to go home.
For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Jogja again.
1. Orientation
– my friends and I
- Jogjakarta
- Last week
2. sequence of event
– we visited Parangtritis beach
- We visited Gembira Loka Zoo
- In Parangtritis beach, we saw a lot of people in that beach, beautiful scenery, many birds flew in the sky, many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs. In Gembira Loka Zoo, we saw many kinds of animals. We looked around in that Zoo, and also took pictures of those animals.
3. coment
For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Jogja again.
Name:Ayu Nur Fadilah
ReplyDeleteclass:x4
Number:02
Last monday was a buys day for me.I spent my time to do a lot of activities from collage to my home.
First,at the morning i did my presentation's assignment with my partner,she was nurhidayah.it took 3 hours.
And then we went to the campus for joining lecture.But,the lecturer said that our presentation's wold be started next week.it made us disappointed the class finished at 12.30
1.Orientation
-who:I,and my partner
-where:my home
-when:Last monday
2.Squence of event
-First,at the morning , i did my presentation assigment with my partner .
- And then we went to the campus for joining lecture.
3.Comment
-it made us disappointed
Nama : Siti Rosana
ReplyDeleteKelas : X4
No.abs : 28
MY HOLIDAY
Last week I went Mount Bromo. I tayed at my friend’s house in probolinggo, East Java. The house has a big garden with colourful flowers and a small pool.
In the morning,my friend and I saw Mount Batok. The scenert was very beautiful. We rode on horseback. It was scary, but it was fun. Then, we went to get a closerlook at the mountain. We took pictures of the beautiful scenery there. After that, we took a rest and had lunch under a big tree. Before we goot home, we went to the zoo at wonokrormo. We went home in the afternoon.
We went very tired. However, I think it was really fun to have a holiday like this. I hope my holiday wiil be more interesting.
1. Orientation :
- who : I and my friend
- where : Mount Bromo Probolinggo, East Java
- when : last week
2. Sequence of Events
- saw Mount Batok
- we rode on hourseback
- we took pictures of the beautiful scenery there
- we took a rest and had lunch under a big tree
- we went to the zoo at Wonokromo
3. Comments
- Holiday a very beautiful and impressive
Nama : Ririn Azizah
ReplyDeleteKelas : X4
No.abs : 26
An Unlucky Day
One morning I got up with the feeling that the day was going to be an unluncky one for me. How right it was ! I found that is was already 06:15 a.m.
I rushed into the bathroom. I did not see a piece of soap lying on the floor. I stepped on it and slipped, almost breaking my back in the process.
Then, I went into the dining room for my breakfast. I gulped down the tea without realizing that it was very hot. It burnt my tongue. I spat it out and could not eat anything because my tongue hurt. I got dressed and rushed to the bus stop.
Ufortunately, I just missed the bus. My heart sank and that I would be late for school.
When, I Reached school, my name was taken down by teacher . The teacher scolded me for being late. Tomy humiliation, I was made to stand outside the class. I was so upset by the incidents that I could not study properly. But worse was to come.
After school, I was on my way home when something hard hit me on the head. Someone had thrown a bag of fish bones out of the window and it landed on me! Was boiling with lage but could do nothing. However, luckily for me, this only raised a small lump on mmy head.
I managed to reach home safe and sound, and did not dave to go out again for the rest of the day.
Orientation:-who:I
-Where: rushed to the bust
-When: one morning
Sequence of events:
-event 1 : I rushed into the bathroom
-event 2 : I stepped on the soap and slipping
-event3 : I went into the dining room for my breakfast.
-event4 : I just missed the bus
-event 5: The teacher scolded me for being late
-event6: I was on my way home when something hard hit me on the head
Coment: do not rush into something because it can cause
harm to yourself.
last frisay a friend of mine asked me to accompanny him to buy a new shirt at a departement store. we left home at 3 p.m by motorcycle. As soon as we arrived there. we went to the clothes section. I let him choose one. an houe later, I got bored watching him confused in choosing a shirt. so I left him and went to cassette counter. thirty minutes later, I went back to the clothes section, but I couldn`t find d him there. My mobile phone was broken, so couldn`t call him. I went to the parking area. I saw his motorcycle was there, but I could`t find him I waited for him for a few moments, then finally I gave up and decided to ho home.
ReplyDelete1.Orientation
-who: I,a friend
-where: department store
-when: last friday
2. sequence of events
-my mobile phone was broken
-I gave up and decided to go home
3. Comment
-
orientation
ReplyDelete-who ; michael and my family
-where ; in beach
-when ; weeks ago
Sequence of event
Event 1
michael weeks ago, his parents and sister will kaka picnic to the beach. they quickly prepared in the morning merka left from 09.00 in the morning they were going to the beach it was put on the car.
stanley father or gathered in the car with care, they will kr gas station or petrol station. purchase fuel for cars them.They buy a full tank of fuel because it wears prjalanan 3 hours to go to the beach.
Event 2
after getting to that goal, they first did eat siang.mereka feel hungry after a long drive. they ate under a palm tree in the sand ptih.
then they swim. play ball and the road on the beach before they go to the house at 04.00 pm
they feel but they are very happy. michael weeks ago, his parents and sister will kaka picnic to the beach. they quickly prepared in the morning merka left from 09.00 in the morning they were going to the beach it was put on the car.
Event 3
stanley father or gathered in the car with care, they will kr gas station or petrol station. purchase fuel for cars them.They buy a full tank of fuel because it wears prjalanan 3 hours to go to the beach.
after getting to that goal, they first did eat siang.mereka feel hungry after a long drive. they ate under a palm tree in the sand ptih.
Event 4
then they swim. play ball and the road on the beach before they go to the house at 04.00 pm
they feel but they are very happy
Comments
My vacation very happy ..
Name: fakihotun titiani
ReplyDeleteClass: x.4
Last holiday was linda’s unforgettable experience . she could spent her holiday by visiting many interesting places.
First ,she visited her grandmother in malang.she enjoyed salekta, the place with cool and comfortabe air. The scenery was beautiful. She spent a day there. She didn`t forget to buy special fruit from that city,apples. They are sweet and fresh.
Her next destination was yogyakarta where her aunt, mrs. Lutfia lived. Although the weather was hot, she could enjoy parangtritis beach, prambanan temple and malioboro stree.
The last trip was dieng plateu. The cold weather made her vacation nice and enjoyable. Dieng was her uncle’e resident. She enjoyed “ Telaga Warna” and wonderful landscape
1 Orientation
-who? linda
-where? visiting many interesting places,visited her grandmother in malang, next destination was yogyakarta where her aunt, mrs. Lutfia lived
-when? Last holiday
2 sequence of events
-event 1 ? First ,she visited her grandmother in malang.she enjoyed salekta, the place with cool and comfortabe air. The scenery was beautiful. She spent a day there. She didn`t forget to buy special fruit from that city,apples. They are sweet and fresh
-event 2 ? Her next destination was yogyakarta where her aunt, mrs. Lutfia lived. Although the weather was hot, she could enjoy parangtritis beach, prambanan temple and malioboro stree
3 coment
Moment
a most enjoyable
NAMA :NITA MEIRINA
ReplyDeleteKELAS : X4
NO ABSN :23
Last weekend, my friends and I went camping. We reached the camping ground after we walked for about one and a half hour from the parking lot. We built the camp next to a small river. It was getting darker and colder, so we built a fire camp.
The next day, we spent our time observing plantation and insects while the girls were preparing meals. In the afternoon we went to the river and caught some fish for supper. At night, we held a fire camp night. We sang, danced, read poetry, played magic tricks, and even some of us performed a standing comedy.
On Monday, we packed our bags and got ready to go home.
I feel very happy and very tired
1. Orientation 2. Sequence of Event 3. Comments
-who -Event 1 -I feel very happy and very tired
_me and my friends _we built a tent camp next to a small river
-where - Event 2
_camping ground _observing plantion
-when -Event 3
_last weekend _Our pack boxed and ready ready to go home
Nama : Fitriani Abdi
ReplyDeleteNo. : 12
Kelas : X. 4
A STUDY TOUR TO JOGJA
Last week, my friends and I went to Jogja. We visited many places.
First, we visited Parangtritis beach. The sun shone brightly and the scenery was very beautiful there. We felt the wind blew across to us. We also saw a lot of people in that beach. There were many birds flew in the sky. Also, there were many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs. Second, we visited Gembira Loka Zoo. We saw many kinds of animals there such as monkeys, tigers, crocodiles, snakes, etc. We looked around in that Zoo, and also took pictures of those animals. Then, we felt hungry, so we went to a restaurant. As soon as we finished our lunc, we decided to go home.
For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Jogja again.
1. Orientatioan :
-My friends and I
- Jogjakarta
- Last week
2. Sequence of Event :
-We visited Parangtritis beach
- We visited Gembira Loka Zoo
- In Parangtritis beach, we saw a lot of people in that beach, beautiful scenery, many birds flew in the sky, many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs. In Gembira Loka Zoo, we saw many kinds of animals. We looked around in that Zoo, and also took pictures of those animals.
3. Comments :
For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Jogja again.
ReplyDeleteNama : Fika adi tiyani
Kelas : x4
no : 11
mr. and mrs. charly were on a tour to Europe. They were traveling on a guided tour to five countries. They were going to travel trhough netherland , Belgium , Germany , Switzerland, and France for two weeks.
The guide for the tour was a Swiss. On the day of the travel the guide told them to check their passport , their traveler cheques , and their fheyoreign cash. He told them to keep them safely.
they traveled in comfortable coach with toilet , music , and video. The guide stopped the coach at many famous places.he explained the cultural importance of the places .they stayed in hotels for the night and ate in the restaurant.
on the way ,they stoped at small inns to eat lunch .in big towns .they went for shopping.they bought many souvenirs for their friends .they enjoyed the two-week tour.
orientation
who :Mr.and Mrs. charly
where :europe
when :two-week tour
event 1 : mr. and mrs. charly were on a tour to Europe.
event 2 :The guide for the tour was a Swiss.
event 3 : they traveled in comfortable coach with toilet , music , and video.
event 4 : on the way ,they stoped at small inns to eat lunch .in big towns
COMENT :they enjoyed the two-week tour.
TOUR TO THE BOTANIC GARDEN
ReplyDeleteOn Thursday 24 April, year eight student went to the botanic garden,we walked down and got into bus.
After we arrived at garden, we walked down to the education center , we went to have alook around. First we went to the orchid farm and Mrs. Rita read us some of information. Then we looked to all the lovelly plants. After that we went down to a little spot in the botanic garden and had morning tea.
Next we took some pictures and than we went back to the education center to have lunch. After that we went for walk.
A lady took us around and introduced her self . then she explained what we were going to do. Next she took us into the green house . it was most interesting
Soon after we had finished we went back outside. Finally we got into the bus and returned to school. We were tired but happy.
ORIENTATION
-who:year eight student
-where:botanic garden
-when:on Thursday 24 april
SEQUENCE OF EVENTS
-event 1:we went to orchid farm
-event 2:we went to a little spot
In botanic garden and had
morning tea
-event 3:we took some pictures
And than we went back to the
education center
-event 4:finally we got into the
bus
and returned to school
COMMENTS
-we were tired but happy