Find or make a personal recount text and write on your recount text on my blog as comment in this writing task! and complete these questions!
1. Orientatioan :
- Who is involved?
- Where did it happen?
- When did it happen?
2. Sequence of event :
- What happened?
- What did it happen?
- What did you do?
3. Comments
- What's your comment about what had happened?
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Drowned in the river
ReplyDeleteIn the river, while I was a kid
Me and my sister drowned in the river, Me and my sister want to cross the river because we want play in the field....
While my sister and I through the wood to cross the river canadian band suddenly my sister felt into the river and we are tryed, to retrieve it using wood. Unexpectly, turns out my sister slipped and without I know her tried to hold me and my sister and I ended up falling into the river together.
I am feeling angry to my sister,
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- Inayah purwaningrum : 11
- Septiani nur akhmaliah : 26
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1. Euis Rosdiana (08)
2. Eli Suryani (06)
3. Mita Indriyani (18)
4. Anggun Safitri (01)
Last week, my friends and I went to Jogja. We visited many places.
First, we visited Parangtritis beach. The sun shone brightly and the scenery was very beautiful there. We felt the wind blew across to us. We also saw a lot of people in that beach. There were many birds flew in the sky. Also, there were many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs. Second, we visited Gembira Loka Zoo. We saw many kinds of animals there such as monkeys, tigers, crocodiles, snakes, etc. We looked around in that Zoo, and also took pictures of those animals. Then, we felt hungry, so we went to a restaurant. As soon as we finished our lunc, we decided to go home.
For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Jogja again.
1. – my friends and I
- Jogjakarta
- Last week
2.– we visited Parangtritis beach
- We visited Gembira Loka Zoo
- In Parangtritis beach, we saw a lot of people in that beach, beautiful scenery, many birds flew in the sky, many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs. In Gembira Loka Zoo, we saw many kinds of animals. We looked around in that Zoo, and also took pictures of those animals.
3. For me, that was a beautiful day. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Jogja again.
NAMA KELOMPOK
ReplyDelete1. DODIK WITRA B.A(5)
2. ELMATIA R(7)
3. KHUMAIROTUL MUFIDAH(12)
4. NUR LAILAH(20)
A TOUR TO THE YOGYAKARTA
KHUMAI’S DIARY
Last year, I went to Yogyakarta . I was so happy because it was my frist time to visit the place with my friend’s and my teacher
One the first day , we visited Borobudur temple the place is wonderful. After that , we went to Gembira loka zoo . Finally , we went to Malioboro . We bought many things like . shoes , bag and some souvenir . we spend two days in Yogyakarta and that was really fun
ORIENTATION
WHO : Khumai , and Khumai Friend’s
WHERE : Yogyakarta
WHEN : Last Year
SEQUENCE OF EVENTS
Event 1 : On the first day . we visited Borobudur temple
Event 2 : We went to gembira loka zoo
Event 3 : Finally , we went to Malioboro
Event 4 : we bought many things like , shoes and some souvenir
COMMENTS
Yogyakarta it was really fun
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ReplyDelete1. Nurwanti (21)
2. Melan Ningrum (17)
3. Pusdika Madiani (22)
4. Aulia Febriyanti (02)
Kelas X.3
Going to Sea
on a week ago, me and my friends went to sea when he got in my ocean and the friend's friends are racing to make the temples of using sea sand. After that, a win is my friend but unfortunately the temple was brought waves washed into the sea. So my friend ended up winning that losing is me.
it is the story of us.
Dear: ani
ReplyDeletecamping is one of activates that my family love very much.all my family just loved the nice atmosphere of the camping site.we just want the life with no traffic which it means no noise sometimes.the twittering of brids and the sound of the wind blowing are the things we would like to enjoy.we usually go camping at the end of the months.
last month we went camping in the mountainous area.my father's colleague recommended this camping site.we fell in love with this place at the first sight.it is really a nice spot for the tent.arriving at the campsite,we were busy with our own duties.after my father struggled hard to put up the tent this afternoon,my mom brought some food for dinner.everything was in place for a great family camping trip.we slept soundly in tent under a sparkling night sky,and woke up early because of the chattering monkeys.no hustle or bustle.this dark morning was very quiet with the soft light of lanterns.we had nice chat inside the warm tents.
After breakfast-just delicious home-cooked food-we hiked to the Crater lake. it was a great place . we were at peace with nature, a prepect place to slow down and recharge. walked (for the surefooted) around the rim of the crater. hidden on the shores of a deep volcanic lake , the creter offered lovely views over the plains. ths camping activity was the most memorable back - to - nature experience i ever have !
1.orientation
-who went to camping?
Jawaban:great family ani
-where did the writer visit to?
Jawaban:caming in the mountainous area
-when did the writer go to camping?
Jawaban:last month
2
-event 1
Camping in one of activates that my family love very much
-event 2
Camping in the mountainous area
Event 3
Breakfast-just delicious home-cooked food-we hiked to the Crater Lake
3.comments
Camping rocks
KELOMPOK
NAMA :KRISNA DEWI YULIANI :13
IMROATUL KHASANAH :10
RISHARTI :24
TRI PUJIANTI :28
KELAS :X.3
MY LAST HOLIDAY WAS GREAT
ReplyDeleteMy last holiday was great. My family and I visited my grandparents. We traveled by car. It was along trip. We stayed at my grandparents’ house for four days. We did a lot of things together. We cooked and prepared our meals. After that we ate them.
We also worked in the garden, climbed the trees, and played some games. Everybody was happy. Oh, no. it was time to go home. We hugged Grandma and Grandpa, and we kissed them goodbye. I really enjoyed my holiday.
ORIENTATION
WHO:iam,and my family
WHERE:visited my grandparents
WHEN:on my last holiday
SEQUENCE OF EVENTS
Event 1:visited my grandparents.
Event 2:we stayed at my grandparents.
Event 3:we worked in the garden,climbed the trees,and played some game.
Event 4:we hugged grandma and grandpa,and we kissed them goodbye.
COMMENT:
My last holiday was great!!!
Kelas:X.3
Nama Kelompok:
1.NUR FAHMI.F (19)
Last month we went camping in the mountainous area. My father’s father colleague recommended this camping site. We fell in love with this place at the first sight. It is really a nice sport for the tent. Arrifing at the campsite, we were busy with out own duties. After my father struggled hard to put up the tent this afternoon , my mom brought some food for dinner. Everything was in place for a great family camping trip. We slept soundly in tent under a sparkling night sky, and woke up early because of the chattering monkeys. No hustle or bustle. This dark morning was very quiet with the soft light of lanterns. We had nice chat inside the warm tent.
ReplyDeleteAfter breakfast just delicious home cooked food we hiked to the crater lake. It was a great place. We were at peace with nature, a perfect place to slow down and recharge. We walked (for the surefooted) around the rim of the crater. Hidden on the shores of a deep volcanic lake,the crater offered lovely views over the plaints. This camping activity was the most memorable back tunature experience ever have!
Who: the writer and family
When: last month
Where: in the mountainous area
Event 1: went camping
Event 2: put up the tent
Event 3: had dinner
Event 4: breakfast just delicious food
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Siti nur anisah
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